As promised I'll try to write a critique for this ^^ It'll be the first time I've ever tried to critique anything so... Yeah, I'll try to make what I'm saying understandable as opposed to just some random rambling only me or someone very much like me could understand.
Okay, first thing's first. I really like the clothing folds, you're so good at them, they could probably be enhanced a bit by some shading though ;
The first thing about this that I really saw as a flaw would be the green haired girls left(?) arm. It kinda seems like it has a dent in it. If you ask me I think the dent-ish bit (sorry if you can't understand what I'm saying) should be facing towards her body and be a bit smaller.
The girls left leg also kind of bothers me. It seems like she has her knee slightly bent and it's broken or oddly shaped or something. That could be remedied by moving the part not covered by the jeans to the right or by changing the angle so that part of the leg points to the left more ^^
I really like the dripping water, though in some places it seems to defy gravity a little (presuming she's somehow moving upwards and to the right), such as on some parts of the green haired girls hair.
Speaking of the green haired girls hair, what exactly is going on with it? o.o It kind or seems like she had a head band on but it's started falling off. I can't seem to work out if that was what you intended it to be of if it's been put up with a hair tie or what's going on with it And part of the shine on her hair ends before her hair does.
I like the blue haired girls hair. There's just something about it I really like, though I cant put my finger on what o.o I do kinda think the sword she's holding is a little thick though. And that her leg (the one furthest right) gets a little bit too small.
To me the clouds seem a little off They don't quite seem as fluffy as realistic-ish clouds, but at the same time they're not solid as cartoon-ish clouds.
Also, I don't know why but I think this should have a small black border o.o I honestly have no idea why
Okay, first thing's first. I really like the clothing folds, you're so good at them, they could probably be enhanced a bit by some shading though
The first thing about this that I really saw as a flaw would be the green haired girls left(?) arm. It kinda seems like it has a dent in it. If you ask me I think the dent-ish bit (sorry if you can't understand what I'm saying) should be facing towards her body and be a bit smaller.
The girls left leg also kind of bothers me. It seems like she has her knee slightly bent and it's broken or oddly shaped or something. That could be remedied by moving the part not covered by the jeans to the right or by changing the angle so that part of the leg points to the left more ^^
I really like the dripping water, though in some places it seems to defy gravity a little (presuming she's somehow moving upwards and to the right), such as on some parts of the green haired girls hair.
Speaking of the green haired girls hair, what exactly is going on with it? o.o It kind or seems like she had a head band on but it's started falling off. I can't seem to work out if that was what you intended it to be of if it's been put up with a hair tie or what's going on with it
I like the blue haired girls hair. There's just something about it I really like, though I cant put my finger on what o.o I do kinda think the sword she's holding is a little thick though. And that her leg (the one furthest right) gets a little bit too small.
To me the clouds seem a little off
Also, I don't know why but I think this should have a small black border o.o I honestly have no idea why
Okay, I think that's all